- I noticed that the text showing where the quote was was much darker than intended and too closely placed to the bottom right.
- Some of the white can be seen through the small gaps so next time putting the tiles up on a poster that's already got a black background, or is mostly black.
- Noticed the two words 'public' were placed underneath each other, need to lengthen the text box to stop this from happening again.
- The text could do with being larger to grab the audience's attention, make sure not to let it look intimidating or accusing.
- Size of the small print is good, asterix on the quote could do with being smaller than the other type.
Alterations made:
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