Thursday, 23 April 2020

Feedback from Dom

Feedback:
I've attached some of the visuals which I think stood out to me in particular. I also think there is some real potential in those website animations so even if you create a book it would be good to see how this translates to screen as well as they're strong, even if it's landing pages like you've done already! I put in the reference of the black and white imagery in the book rather than the coloured as felt this had more connection to the fluxus research but you could experiment with adding a spot colour like you did with the dots on the website. 

The example where you have text and image together with the arrows and numbers is funnily enough similar to the idea we spoke about for the fringe festival development! Where we spoke about adding images in sentences and do think it works well here. Some conceptually informed (and lovely!) work.



















Reflections:
> Black and white imagery is stronger as it relates to the Fluxus movement more - something I also felt was a strong visual to go with. 
> Having web animations could be something to develop as they were effective. Doesn't need to be over complicated but simply executed to demonstrate the concept and idea - Just make sure they achieve the goal, could develop publication then translate to screen, see the different ways this could be done? 
> What will I produce? Still feeling unsure on this as the idea works with exhibition, publication and screen (to an extent). Which direction to go in? 
 - Developing an exhibition could create content for the publication, and all wrap together nicely. 
 - Creating a publication that can be translated to screen could be a second way to go with the project. Investigating the differences between the two mediums for communicating the same message. 

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