Design Boards Crit

(1)

• Maybe include research on screen printing.
• Good range of research done.
• Neatly laid out.
• Remove hyphenation to make it easier to read.
• Include any more variations of the flag you have.
• Include final outcome for inner sleeve.

(2)

• Love the scrunched up paper with the gold, could you do this process for fabric also?
• Could you develop a new typeface out of folds etc. 
• Japanese research is really interesting and relevant. Could you make inner sleeve that folds into a bowl?

(3)

• Could you photograph the record in brighter lighting because it's more effective in real life.
• The design is really nice and well thought out. 
• Initial ideas seem quite type based, could you try vary these a bit? Maybe try collage?
• Boards seem really developed, writing is concise and easy to understand. 

To do:

- Edit the punctuation on boards.

- Include research on screen printing.

- Include picture of flag development, and inner sleeve. 

- Do collage with text (if time allows).