Significance of Numbers - Talk with Rosie

• Think the grid-ed sketchy lines behind the text looks better than without.
  - I agree, think they make the spacing within the text make more sense, provided some context as well as a structure.
  - Also using this method the history pages to be one page only, so don't take up as much room within the zine. 
• The places pages could be the same but show a transitional element.
  - Again I agree, just struggling to figure out how to do this.
  - Maybe they could contain the lines but have the type transition to a different time, experimenting more with a sans serif typeface, more like the original ones.
• The illustrations are nice, but they send a very different message, not something you're technically going for by the looks of it.
  - Agree, think the idea is nice, they look good as a simple layout but don't actually communicate much to the audience.
  - People seem to ask what are they and then I have to explain which isn't the aim and shows it's not successful at demonstrating a sense of 'bonkers'