Significance of Numbers - Peer Crit

Alterations:

- Made the images bordering the text contain more black than white, in response to peer group.
- Need to work on illustration insert next.

Potentially layering the images from all 3
illustrators with each other? Wanting to
communicate the nonsensical element of
the system, do I need to do this or do the
drawings do that themselves?

Heather's Illustrations are a lot more
image based, they look like an
object. Thinking of how to use
images like these within the project.

- Thinking back to joe gilmore and publications, could present the images over pages so you don't get to see the full picture.
- Could play with the idea of scaling, having some small and some large?
- This is a chance to play and experiment as it's a more artistic interpretation.