Crit Feedback

• The lunch box idea received the most comments of how to improve, the composition as well as colour pallet since it looks quite mundane. 
• The cross section of helmet got a lot of positive feedback, people like how I combined the space theme with the idea of inside vs outside. 
• The texture of the background from the tin foil was liked, could incorporate this as a background for future experiments.
• People liked the origami spaceman, someone suggesting incorporating themes from the book onto the spaceman physically, such as the title or august's name. 
• It was suggested that the tin foil should be used for texture instead of a visual.

The idea I want to continue is the 50/50 cross section helmet idea, as well as the inside vs outside.
- need to test the suggestions from crit first then make a start of development.

TO DO:
-  tin foil texture
- papier mache helmet & photograph
- re photography astronaut with additions