Crit Feedback

• Positive reactions to overall idea and design.
• Book cover should be simple, liked the paper stock found for the cover. - Need to start developing ideas based off of feedback, how to keep it simple, does this work, going to emboss or print etc. 
• Text for the cover should be a small, simple, serif font places to the edge of the page - don't know if I like this idea as much as having a simple front cover that is more traditional.
• Text needs to be more developed, having a range of typefaces might add to the chaos even more. TEST THIS
• Have a colour scheme, all the comedy on a certain coloured paper, add a sense of organisation to the book as a whole. - do the audience need to know about the colour coding? is that important? what colour scheme to use and why?
• Arrange text in interesting ways, inspired by peter and paul images.